It was held an International food fair in Hong Kong Methodist college on the 7Th December,2007 in the afternoon. It was organised by the F.2 studens.
The principal and teachers were invited. All F.2 students cooked their food and soldto the teachers and F.1 students.
In the Intternational food fair , there were a lof of different kinds of food. It cost $2 for each food. The money was donated to the charity. It was a good life education for the F.2 students.
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I'm glad you are using short, concise sentences, Charlie. This is how to write an article, and it's also an excellent way to learn to write anything.
What is "it", by the way? What does"It was held and International food fair..." mean?
Proofread your work and you'll score higher.
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